#1:
Niche: POD shirts, hoodies, etc
Problem: Product description

– Tweak headline
– Use proof “150,000 happy customers” as pre-headline
– Add review in box under headline
– Make one-sentence paragraphs
– Rearrange bullet points
– Add descriptive punch words to boring bullet points
– Add top UVP as one of the bullet points
– Consider using icons instead of bullet points
– Add bridge sentence between bullets and warning copy
– Add CTA copy as last sentence and remind them of guarantee

#2
Niche: Pre-used and NEW wooden barrels
Problem: Home page copy and description

– How to make copy jump out so it doesn’t get missed
– New design concept for shipping areas
– Increase font size to 16pt on description
– Add review under headline and statements
– Add pre-headline that says, “Thousands of customers
– Get user video reviews and test in description
– Get more user review with pictures of themselves in it
– Delivery guy should ask customer to take photos in use
– Create your own video for description
– Try Influencer marketing as another traffic source