Member: Janelle Christa
Niche: Spiritual empowerment courses
Critique: Homepage and product description
– adding social proof
– leading with tour biggest point of difference which is educating over 5million people
– adding images to each feature
– adding reviews for each element of your course
– adding an infographic that shows the 3-step system
– using congruent design and colours for uvp badges

Member: Andrea Butter
Niche: designed Leather products.
Critique: home and product page

– improve banner by adding your brand design elements.
– increase text size and layout of headline
– tell more of the story behind the artists and meaning of designs
– getting more influencers
– headline on the product description
– adding reviews at the top of product description
– adding icons of imagery to increase readability

Member: Linda
Niche: Jewelry
Critique: Home page
– story story story. Tell your amazing story!!!
– make banner easier to read.
– good advice from Deven re selling jewellery

Member: Tim Caldwell
Niche: Skin care
Critique: Home page
– Headline critique
– adding specificity to headline
– using reviews more
– finding copywriting nuggets from reviews
– adding more feminine copy
– testing a page for men!
– using product page bullet points on banner